A Falling Sound

Posted on 2015-08-202020-04-08 by Mellow Curmudgeon in (reblog), haiku, humor, photography

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The photo by Dancing Echoes reblogged below has inspired another haiku.

         A flipped coin may land
         on edge. Erect, her dropped shoe
         mimics his penis.

At my age, on the other hand, those high heels and narrow toes scream “Bunion City!”

Dancing Echoes

Shoes dropping to floor
Quickened anticipation
Clothes fly in frenzy

In response to CARPE DEIM HAIKU KAI: On The Trail With Basho Encore 5 a falling sound

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Poet Rummager says:

2015-08-21 at 4:56 am

Now I know why I love shoes so much! Ha! I like how one post of yours can be so scientifically based and pondered and then another can be so unrestrained and naughty. Such fun 😀

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1. Mellow Curmudgeon says:
  
  2015-08-21 at 9:41 am
  
  U set a good example. {Pressed the wrong [Reply] button when I replied a little while ago.}
  
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Dancing Echoes says:

2015-08-21 at 10:30 pm

I am honored that you not only reblogged my post but matched it with a great haiku of your own. Thank you!

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