A rose by any other name would smell as sweet, said the Big Bad Bard. That is a good approximation; one striking exception is a photo by Elusive Trope that is effectively reblogged below. (I say “effectively” because there were technical reasons to avoid the [Reblog] button in this case.) A really good title can enhance work that is already good. (Giving a nice name or title to junk may help sell it but will not dejunkify it.) When Mark Twain likened the difference between “the right word” and a merely adequate word to the difference between the lightning and the lightning bug, he was stretching the point. In the case of Elusive Trope’s photo, however, he nailed it.
Originally posted on Elusive Trope:
The Transition to Created Light
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We look at the photo and see an austerely beautiful composition with strong colors. One possible title (inspired by the actual title of Whistler’s famous painting of his mother) would be accurate but rather clunky and stuffy:
Composition in Blue, Black, and Yellow: Light Fixture
Maybe we should use the time of day. Saying just “Dusk” or “Twilight” would be accurate and mercifully brief, but those words have a sad or ominous connotation. Our distant ancestors had good reason to fear nocturnal predators. There is nothing sad or ominous in the light fixture’s defiance of the coming darkness.
Maybe we should be more specific about what is happening at dusk, with something close to the actual title:
The Transition to Artificial Light
Adequate? Yes, but still not quite right. The phrase “artificial light” has a milder version of the connotation of “artificial color” or “artificial flavor” as something to be confessed, not proclaimed. Changing one word leads to the actual title used by Elusive Trope:
The Transition to Created Light
Now the title reconnects us to the creativity of distant ancestors who invented campfires that discouraged their nocturnal predators. Then there is the creativity of more recent ancestors who invented candles and lamps that let them mend their nets or write their thoughts during long dark evenings at high latitudes. Still more recently, the creativity of people like Edison and Tesla made it so easy to light the darkness that nowadays we do it too much and appreciate it too little. (The failing is ours, not theirs.) Elusive Trope found the right word; we thrill to the lightning; Mark Twain’s ghost says “Told ya!” between puffs on his cigar.
I’m most honored by this post, I was taken aback when I saw my photo as I scrolled up on the posts from blogs I follow (I’m 2 days from the most recent posts but I’m catching up). “what the hey…?” popped into my mind. Then I read the post, thinking beforehand a post riffing off the photo like good jazz…wow. And let me say you had a particular take on it than I did when I created the title. “Distant ancestors” was not in my consciousness, but I love it. Just as I love: (Giving a nice name or title to junk may help sell it but will not dejunkify it.) Dejunkify is my new word. There’s a poem somewhere in that word. Again thanks for the post and the reflection which you gave the photo.Underscores the reason I attempt to create art.
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Glad U liked the reblog. I was puzzled by how stongly the combination of photo and title moved me, especially when I noticed that saying “Artificial” rather than “Created” would be both more obvious and less effective.
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