Carpe Diem Weekend Meditation #81
Poetry Archive (5) loneliness or emptiness
Choose a haiku, tanka or other form of Japanese poetry from your archive and share it with us all. Tell us why you have chosen that poem … and create a new poem inspired on your choice.
A short sequence of 3-5-3 haiku dealt with emptiness for a challenge in another series. I like the way the first haiku sets up the second one, so the whole sequence is my archive choice. Can I write a new poem for the current challenge? Yes, and there is a reason to put it before the archive choice. The new poem is a 5-7-5 haiku:
Lonely in the crowd
and weary of empty talk,
I seek solitude.
© Igor Zakowski | 123RF Stock Photo
(Image has been cropped.)
Empty bowl
atop microwave,
just for looks.
Empty bowl,
heavy with nothing.
Hunger pangs.
I give to several charities that help hungry people in many places with a mix of short-term and long-term efforts. In particular, my next gift to CARE will be matched 5X. The matching grant offer on CARE.org/match will expire 2019-05-25. (A popup on CARE.org has another match that expires sooner, on 04-30.) If U can give more than whatever U may have already given to charities like CARE this year, now is a good time.
I like the simplicity of your Haikus, it matches the aesthetic of the bowl. Seeking solitude in a crowd is a paradoxical yet familiar wish, I think. Food for thought.
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Excellent set of haiku. I love how your haiku are full of emptiness and deeper meaning. Thank you for sharing.
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