(reblog), haiga, haiku, photography

Clams in the Clouds

Two haiku (each inspired by a photo of clouds imitating clams) illustrate the synergy between poem and image in a modern haiga (with a photo as the image).  Haiku #2 uses a modern kigo (“abalone”).  I took the calm photo; Sue Ranscht took the dramatic one.
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The cloud images in this post were in an earlier post (for a photography challenge) that emphasized synergy between pastel pink and green.  Now I am responding to a haiku challenge with emphasis on synergy between poem and image in a modern haiga (with a photo as the image).  Haiku #2 uses the modern kigo abalone.

To those who have not seen many nacreous clouds, the poems’ metaphors might seem far-fetched.  Presenting the photos along with the poems they inspired may reassure readers willing to trust that the photographers refrained from deceptive editing.  I took the calm photo; Sue Ranscht took the dramatic one.

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© Sue Ranscht | Space, Time, and Raspberries

Clams in the Clouds #1
|Serene clouds
|give mother-of-pearl
|to old eyes.
Clams in the Clouds #2
|Molten pewter clouds:
|some are tinted pink or green.
|Abalone shell.

4 thoughts on “Clams in the Clouds

  1. “Molten pewter clouds” is a perfect metaphor for the inside of an abalone shell.

    Thank you for sharing my cloud photo. To look up and gasp have been some of my favorite moments.

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    1. And thank U for taking and posting such a magnificent photo.

      There is an interesting duality about metaphors here.  I had been thinking of line 3 of #2 as my metaphor for how your clouds look; U read line 1 of #2 as a metaphor for how an abalone shell looks.  Either way is fine by me.

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